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I don’t know why your comment was removed, but I didn’t delete it.
I acknowledge your criticism, but that wasn’t the story we were interested in telling. Sorry to disappoint.
That was really cute and very well written, could have been better, but that also feels like a matter of fursonal... taste...
Feels like there are things you could eventually go back and add in too, not a whole lot though, but there are some details that were skipped over.
If its another VN, Comic, or even Written story, I would love to see some more of these guys, not necessarily more more though! XP
May I just say, this is probably the best VN that I've read in a while! The characters are likable, the story is relatable at times and Otsuka is d a d d y
I really, really like it. Keep up the good work!
does this have sex scenes?
Strokkur is amazing! n_n/ xa'll really wrapped everything a gay furry VN is about, into a single story~ UwU the writing is good and the characters fun :3 my favourite part is that there are a lot of well constructed sentences which really make Strokkur enjoyable from start to finish~
My only complaint would be not having gotten a proper moment alone with that wolf knot :p but otherwise, Amaaazing work~ >_</
This turned out really good! The world absolutely needs more cute, short experiences like this methinks. This sets an incredible standard for projects to follow, and I'm very excited to see more out of you!
Also dear Lord Kevin is short. Somebody get this boy some pumps or Something.
Aw, this is such a cute story! I did think it would be just about non-sexual casual nudity (which is something I've kind of wanted to write about for a while, heh) but the sex scenes were well written and not unwelcome!
Congrats on the release and happy pride month to the team! ^^
Glad you enjoyed it, regardless.
Happy Pride! 🏳️🌈
Also Yoga Bear did Downward Dog so Strokkur could sukhasana, love your work and the short VN format.
Daaam, this was pretty good! and done in only six weeks? I hope you keep up making VN's, its so goood. Hope you keep the 'parts' the same too.
Thank you very much! We're aiming to hopefully release the first build of our next project by the end of July, very excited to share it with you all :) The 'parts' are there to stay for sure.
This was just absolutly FUN. The awkwardness was actually entertaining instead of just dumb. This is one I'll definitely follow.
I want to Android download it game pls
Sorry, mate. We’re still working on the Android build. Give us a week or two to sort it out.
The Triumphant music. Brilliant.
Are you talking about the music that sounds like it should be in a Marvel film during the sex scene? Because that was inspired.
Been waiting for this! I'm sure I'll have more thoughts soon, but for now: Congrats!
Is this a full game owo?
Yep! Just a short story, really. If you've played Yoga Bear, it's just a little bit longer than that.
Congratulations on the release, boys! You are one step closer to becoming Elden Lords of Cum. Keep up the good work!
Look like you there really loves it since I saw it been added to three collections. XD
I should not think too much about it. Sometimes I get confuse and change the games and novels from a collection to another after I start to play it.
I just have so many collection and those are so filled that I always need to spend a time organizing the collections.